Sexism in fiction – Ladies I need your help

Fellow Bloggers, I need your help – Is my book sexist?

Before you skim along, thinking this is a means for me to garner female favour or to promote my book, I really need your help with this.

Now, I do not believe in saying that I am in touch with my ‘feminine side.’ I do not really know what that means. That certain personality or behavioural traits should be defined as gender specific is ludicrous. I am however painfully aware of the lack of positive or powerful roles there are for women in science-fiction. I acknowledge there are vast and highly popular exceptions to this, Ripley, Trinity, Leia.


But for every good example there are ten others, where women appear in stories as victims, for sexual reasons, as mothers, wives and daughters who need to be saved by some hero dripping machismo and one liners to make them swoon, drop their knickers and thank God or The Third Moon of Xxylon for man.

They are all too often titular cliches of the powerless, gorgeous and scantily clad.

I never made a conscious effort to write strong female characters in my book, the story demanded it and I am hoping I have pulled it off (insert ironic innuendo here.)

So before I launch into the daunting salvo of Book 2, can I ask you a question? Are the women characters in my book well rounded? Is there a balance? Do I need to make more of an effort to address what I see as an imbalance? Or am I doing OK?

My plan is to introduce more positive female roles in Book 2 as I am mindful that the three main female characters in my book are all quite negative. Powerful, but negative (I mean, the main ‘bad guy’ is not a guy at all.)

So if you are interested in giving me an opinion – I am very interested in hearing it. I would happily email you a free ebook copy that you can read through the Kindle app on any tablet or Kindle device. Or I can send directly to your Kindle via your Kindle Email address. Or if you prefer, as a word.doc file.

Just contact me through this blog, with details and I will do the rest. Alternatively you can email directly on

A link to my book on Amazon: Blood On Borrowed Wings

I would really value your opinion before launching into book 2.

Thank you




11 thoughts on “Sexism in fiction – Ladies I need your help

  1. Sneaker-Hijabi 21/02/2016 / 4:13 pm

    Please I would really really absolutely love to read the book….

    • Blood On Borrowed Wings 21/02/2016 / 4:24 pm

      Hi Sneaker-Hijabi, thank you for getting in touch. Let me know your email address and I would be delighted to forward you a copy. You can reach me on Thank you.

      • Blood On Borrowed Wings 21/02/2016 / 4:30 pm

        Just sent it. Thank you so much for your interest. Hope you enjoy it.

      • Sneaker-Hijabi 21/02/2016 / 4:35 pm

        I sure will. Thank you too

      • Blood On Borrowed Wings 21/02/2016 / 4:38 pm

        Feel free to reblog my post if you know of anyone else who may be interested. Thanks again

  2. Leeswammes 26/02/2016 / 10:20 am

    Hey Darren, just wanted to say: I’m getting your emails, but you don’t seem to get mine?

  3. Windmills of My Mind 22/08/2016 / 3:25 pm

    I would like to say yes, but, can you give her more strength? And yes they do have femme instincts.

    • Blood On Borrowed Wings 22/08/2016 / 3:44 pm

      Thanks for replying. Really appreciate your feedback too. Could you clarify who needs more strength, and what you mean by that. And who has feminine instincts? Thanks. Daz

      • Blood On Borrowed Wings 22/08/2016 / 6:41 pm

        Thanks so much for reading my book and getting back to me. Means the world to us indie authors. Any feedback at all would help (and a honest review on Amazon would be a godsend). Hope you enjoy it. Darren

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